Shotgun Shack - stage 3

The second colour pass and have made a note to myself stuck next to the painting - "Lose edges!" I am narrowing down what I am looking for in these small paintings and one of the things that bugs me about my work is that it's too literal to what's in front of me. So I'm hoping to start changing this over the next few paintings before I start work on a large commission. Let's see how things go tomorrow.